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Novel Sneak Peek and iAnti Gender Bender Stuff

Wed Apr 22, 2009, 1:54 AM
  • Mood: Thanks
  • Listening to: TV
  • Reading: Manga
  • Watching: TV
  • Playing: ES4: Oblivion
  • Eating: Popcorn
  • Drinking: Tea
Okay so because I fail like that, I have yet another idea for a book. It may be a little overused, but I don't know whether or not it has been done quite like this in novel form. The title of the book is "Crim." It's set in an alternate universe and has a fantasy / medieval feel to it.

"Crim" is short for crimson in case you were wondering, and it's the name of the main character. Duh. It starts off in the guild city of Thain with townsfolk gossiping around a statue that stands erect in the middle of the town. The statue is that of a man named Zodraroth the Dragon Slayer. Zodraroth earned his title for having killed the Great Dragon King of the West.

The following is a little sample of how it might start off. It isn't concrete if I'll start it off like this or not, but meh. We'll see.

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The chirping of the bird was only drowned out by the hustle and bustle of the busy guild city of Thain. Woman with crying children tugging at their dresses as they carried basket fulls that most likely would be used for this evenings meal. Men with hammers clanging away at ironwork over an anvil with sweat dripping down their faces from the heat of the coal furnace. But out of all of this chaos was the annoying gossip that buzzed around a stone statue that loomed high above the buildings in the plaza.

Zodraroth. The man said to have slain that last of the dragon gods. Dragons were supposed to be revered! Worshiped! So how was it a man, whom claimed to have slain a dragon, receive more praise and love than the might dragons! It was vexing. Oh so very vexing.

"Hey hey! Did you hear?"

"Hear what?"

"Thee Zodraroth is coming to the Harvest Festival next week!"

The buzzing of gossip continued to grow as word spread like a wild fire across the plaza after the rumor of the Zodraroth coming to grace the people of Thain with his presence.

"So... that man is actually coming..." said a voice in a hushed whisper, "Heh... haha... hahahaha.... HAHAHAHAHA!"

The buzzing of the city seemed to hush in a moment as eyes turned to the laughter of a man cloaked in black. His eyes were a fiery red, and jet black hair. It was almost as dark as the cloak that he had donned. Showing little care for the amount of townsfolk that had their eyes glued to him, his grin turned into a blood curdling smirk, "so... I can finally see HIM again..." the man scoffed as he walked towards the statue, having the people in his way flinch as the scuffled back a few steps. "Finally..." The man leered into the eyes of the statue as his crazed laughter echoed throughout the plaza.

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So yeah... there is your sneak peek at chapter one of Crim. I might tweak his personally a little, but lets just say for now that Crim hates Zodraroth's guts =/

~`~ Copied and pasted from last journal ~`~

lol so yeah. I had a crazy idea of doing a few iAnti characters as their opposite gender. I was originally going to make it a comic, that that idea was horrible. So instead I'm doing them one by one in the iAnti Gender Bender Series.

I have three of the 5, if not 6 or 7, characters done. First is my OC Fayt, the Kuru's Yukito, followed by Az's Belial. I have the others planned out, but for now that is all I'm saying :iconhurrplz:

Fayt - [link]
Yukito - [link]
Belial - [link]
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Paper Wings
Status: On-hold due to Writer's Block

Table of Contents
Chapter One: Gekkou Academy - Home of the Elite [link]
Chapter Two: Cherry Blossom Hurricane [link]
Chapter Three: The Demons of Gekkou [link]
Chapter Four: Recklessness [link]
Chapter Five: Corridors [link]
Chapter Six: Maverick - Part One: Summer *currently writing - coming soon*
Chapter Seven: Maverick - Part Two: Second Term *coming soon*
Chapter Eight: -pending title- *hint: possible big chapter*
Chapter Nine: -pending title-
Chapter Ten: -pending title-
Chapter Eleven: All Hollows Eve -pending title- *hint: possible big chapter*
Chapter Twelve: -pending title-
Chapter Thirteen: -pending title-
Chapter Fourteen: Eve meant for Two -pending title-
Chapter Fifteen: -pending title- *hint: possible big chapter*
Chapter Sixteen: -pending title-

*Note: Still deciding if I want to break up Maverick into two different chapters, or if I want to make it one. Or if I even want to title it that. I am also trying to figure out when I want Chapter Eight to appear so early, or if I should push it back a little.

*Note: I am not quite sure where I want to make something big happen yet, there is so many thing I want to do with this book ^^ you have no idea.

This is the Table of Contents as of yet, I'm still deciding when to make something big happen. All the chapters that have (hint: possible big chapter) are points at which something big might happen *laughs*. Anyways... I am working on chapter six still, hopefully it will be done soon, I had writers block... *grr*

I'll be updating this from time to time. I just put up to 16 so far because I don't know if I'm gonna finish the story in this book, or if I will make a sequel... till then PLEASE LET ME KNOW WHAT YOU THINK OF IT! Thanks ^^

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This Hideous Yet Gorgeous World
Status: On Hold

Table of Contents

Chapter One: This Troublesome World [link]
Chapter Two: -coming soon-
Chapter Three: -coming soon-
Chapter Four: -coming soon-

This is my first attempt at writing a novel in first person, so it might feel a little weird. I started writing it because I wasn't at home, so I couldn't work on Paper Wings. I am still writing Paper wings, but I will do this from time to time as well. Like always, let me know what you think. PLEASE LET ME KNOW WHAT YOU THINK OF IT! Thanks ^^

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Under A Painted Sky
Status: Reworking the story and fixing things.

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Fangs
Status: On Hold OTL

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Death's Hand Guide
Status: Working on Chapter One and Two

Prologue: [link]

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Seal Less
Status: Dropped due to lose of inspiration

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Crim
Status: Plotting and Working on Chapter One and Cover Art

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And that's it for now. For those of you that actually read this, have a cookie =3

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I'm 19, and I turn 20 on Christmas so don't forget to drop a line.

I'm an unpublished novelist that started writing (generally) when I was around 6 or 7, and my first piece of work was a poem that I had entered in a contest. From then until age 18 I wrote for fun, although I still do, but during the summer of my 18th year I began writing (trying that is) chapters for novels that I hope one day to get published.

To date, all of the novels that I attempted to write have been unsuccessful because either I get extreme cases of writer's block, or I just lose inspiration. I'm planning on scrapping my first book and going a completely new way with it, because I lost everything I had on it when my computer got messed up last year (2008.

Education wise, I am a high school dropout because I had to help out my sick mother so much that I barely could ever make it to school. I am planning on attending a technical college for further school though, I just need the money is all.

That pretty sums it up about me, if you want to know anything further just ask.

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